Introduction letter
To: af_somrita.ganchoudhuri@singaporetech.edu.sg
From: 2001847@sit.singaporetech.edu.sg
SUBJECT: Introduction letter
Dear
Professor Somrita,
My name is Lim Li Wen, and I am writing to formally introduce myself to you. I am
a full-time undergraduate pursuing my studies in Civil Engineering in Singapore
Institute of Technology (SIT).
I
graduated from Singapore Polytechnic last year with a relevant diploma in Civil
Engineering with Business. At a very young age, I always find the study of engineering as something
very appealing, primarily because it heavily relies on problem-solving and a
combination of two of my favourite subjects, Science and Math.
Over
the holidays, I worked as a part-time waitress at a Spanish restaurant. I have developed
a habit of active listening, through the need for constant face-to-face
communication with customers from diverse ethnic backgrounds. Therefore, allowing
me to understand their concern better and address their needs effectively.
My
ability to convey messages in a casual setting has always been easy for me, as
I do not have the pressing factor of expecting to observe my language and
impressing the crowd. Along these lines, I am comfortable leading a gathering
with friends or acquaintances. However, my shortcoming includes not having the
confidence to speak to an enormous crowd. The possibility of being the center of
attention with eyes on me seems overwhelming.
The
goals that I would like to achieve from this module is to be confident and
professional communicating with others, thinking critically with a broader
knowledge base, and interdisciplinary thinking. On top of that, I would like to
improve on my presentation and writing skills.
Thank
you for taking your time off to read this letter, and I look forward to
attending your classes.
Best
regards,
Li
Wen
CVE
1281 Effective Communication
T2
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ReplyDeleteHi Liwen,
ReplyDeleteGlad to meet you and thank you for the introduction.
I like how you structured your letter in a way that its easy for us readers to follow through and providing examples on how you develop your strength. I admire the way you transit from talking about your strength to your weaknesses. It was very clear and well organized making it comfortable to follow.
I believe that you are able to achieve the goals you mentioned. Looking forward to work with you in future.
Cheers!
WenYong
Dear Li Wen,
ReplyDeleteLooks like we are both alumnus of Singapore Polytechnic, what a coincidence!
Your letter was well written and clearly portrayed your strengths and weaknesses with details, thank you for sharing it with us!
It also seems like we both have similar strengths and weaknesses, I’m sure we will get along and work well together. We shall work on our weaknesses and strive to achieve the goals we set for ourselves in this module!
Regards,
Nicole
Dear Li Wen,
ReplyDeleteThanks for writing this letter. I enjoyed reading your letter. There are few issues to consider regarding language use. Below are my suggestions:
At a very young age, I always find the study of engineering as something very appealing, primarily because it heavily relies on problem-solving and a combination of two of my favourite subjects, Science and Math. > At a very young age, I ?
Over the holidays, I worked as a part-time waitress at a Spanish restaurant. I have developed a habit of active listening, through the need for constant face-to-face communication with customers from diverse ethnic backgrounds. > Look for better transition
Therefore, allowing me to understand their concern better and address their needs effectively. > Sounds incomplete?
On top of that, I would like to improve on my presentation and writing skills.
Thank you for taking your time off to read this letter, and I look forward to attending your classes. > Remove unnecessary words
Let's work on this. I look forward to seeing how you can polish the letter.
Best wishes,
Somrita
To: af_somrita.ganchoudhuri@singaporetech.edu.sg
DeleteFrom: 2001847@sit.singaporetech.edu.sg
SUBJECT: Introduction letter
Dear Professor Somrita,
My name is Lim Li Wen, and I am writing to formally introduce myself to you. I am a full-time undergraduate pursuing my studies in Civil Engineering in Singapore Institute of Technology (SIT).
I graduated from Singapore Polytechnic last year with a relevant diploma in Civil Engineering with Business. Since a very young age, I always find the study of engineering as something very appealing, primarily because it heavily relies on problem-solving and a combination of two of my favourite subjects, Science and Math.
Over the holidays, I worked as a part-time waitress at a Spanish restaurant. I have developed a habit of active listening, due to the need for constant face-to-face communication with customers from diverse ethnic backgrounds. Therefore, the stituation has allow me to understand their concern better and address their needs effectively.
My ability to convey messages in a casual setting has always been easy for me, as I do not have the pressing factor of expecting to observe my language and impressing the crowd. Along these lines, I am comfortable leading a gathering with friends or acquaintances. However, my shortcoming includes not having the confidence to speak to an enormous crowd. The possibility of being the center of attention with eyes on me seems overwhelming.
The goals that I would like to achieve from this module is to be confident and professional communicating with others, thinking critically with a broader knowledge base, and interdisciplinary thinking. On top of that, I would like to work on my presentation and writing skills.
Thank you for taking your time off to read this letter, and I look forward to attending your classes.
Best regards,
Li Wen
CVE 1281 Effective Communication
T2